Tuesday, May 25, 2010

This one heart,

Hye there,

This time I have a story. Kindly give ur opinion if you have some free time.=p

There was a girl. She just broke up with her boyfriend for 6 month. Then, there's somebody appeared in her life. Slowly, slowly,slowly come to her lonely life. They never see each other. The man only contact her through his sweet sms or call. At first, she refuse to accept him. She have no faith in love again. But the man makes her feeling stronger. The man always try to cheer up her life. And it's works.

Day by day, the girl deepen her bond with the man she never knew. All she knew were the man was sincere and love her endlessly. Even though they never meet, the girl always believe in whatever the man says. She actually try to not making any mistakes like the past. She pours all the love and her faith to the man she knew.

Then the day come. The day where she suppose to be the happiest girl in the world somehow turn out to be the opposite. They promised to meet. The girl took a long way to the place they decided to meet. She was so,so so happy. She was so eager to see the face of the man she loved.


Finally, she met him...speechlessly.


He was about a half-century man. In quite the same height as her. He has short black-white mix hair. And his face is obviously not in 20's. He smiled to his girl. The girl froze for a second before she gave him a not-too-sweet smile like expected.

"Are you really 25??", she asked.

"Let's leave that question for now. Come on. Let's take a walk", he said.

The girl dont have much choice but to follow him. They took a walk before the girl asked him to stop by at a restaurant. She want to settle this matter no matter what.

"Hey, say.. can I see your ic?", the girl asked. She tried to held back what she's thinking.

"Why? I dont bring it",

"You lied. If you refuse, I'll consider you lie to me",she replied. There was nothing sweet in her voice.

"Ok then....I tried to be honest but....", the man couldn't finished his words. The face of his beloved was totally changed when she saw his ic. The man was 42 years old, and he dared lying to her saying that he is 25. Everything he said before was a lie. He doing so just to win her over. The girl never expected him to lie. She trust him with all she got.

She extremely angry, sad, dissapointed..

The guy really ruin her feeling after all this time. He have done the thing that she hate the most. LYING!

And that evening, she brushed off the man she loved. And the love story ends there. The girl came home with a broken heart. Came back to where she was. Holding a hope that one day she will found the man that really love her.

What do you think? Is it her fault to trust people too much? Is it her fault to fall in love?? Or is it right to play with others feeling?

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2 comments:

  1. it is not her fault . myb she wants to be loved by sumone so much that she accept him wivout knowing him . hmm , love cant be blamed . because love is so pure . and yeah it is not the right thing to do , LYING ! i hate that mehh . huhu .

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  2. she was just tried to not close up her heart to other man..that's why she thought she can love him more than she ever do. but..

    the man lied. And it end up just like that.

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